Ist grammatik rechtschreibung ordnung

Ist die Grammatik und die Rechtschreibung in Ordnung?

Nein, dort schleichen sich viele temporäre und andere Fehler ein. Ich werde Dir heute Abend eine genaue Fehlerkorrektur posten, muss nur leider jetzt offline.

Dear Diary,
today I went to school, it was the first time since three month. At first I was frightened, because I didn't want the persons of my form to see that I have only one leg. I didn't want them to have pity on me. I didn't want to talk about the accident and abuot my dead horse pilgrim.
After that I went into the elevator. Before the doors were closed, two young people were running to me into the elevator.They looked at the blank wall, but I knew that they thought about my missing leg. When the doors of the elevator opened, the two people ran out of the elevator and I heared them Talking about my single leg.
In my classroom I sat down at my table. But then my class came into the classroom. They all said hello to me. Everything was normal. I didn't understand that. They knew about my accident, but they didn't ask about that. The day was better than I thought.
I'm so happy, that my class is as normal as before. I hope that the next schoolday will be better than before.
Good night.
Your Grace

hab ichs gut hinbekommen? ich bin nämlich nicht gerade gut in englisch und das is das abschluss jahr. und da zählen selbst kleine noten.

in deinem Text waren viele, vor allem Zeitfehler. Lies mal genau; ich habe da einiges korrigiert.

Dear Diary,
today I went to school for the first time in the last three months. At first I was frightened, because I didn't want my classmates see that I now have only one leg. I didn't want them to feel sorry for me. I didn't want to talk about the accident and about my dead horse Pilgrim.
After that I entered the elevator. Before the doors closed, two young people rushed into the elevator. They stared at the blank wall, but I knew that they thought about my amputated leg. When the elevator doors opened again, the two people rushed out and I heard them talking about my missing leg.
In my classroom I sat on my table. But then my classmates entered the room. They all said hello to me. Everything was as usual. I didn't understand that. They knew about my accident, but they didn't ask about that. The day was better than I thought.
I'm so happy, that my classmates didn't change their behaviour towards me. I hope that the next schoolday will be better than before.
Good night.
Your Grace
P.S. Der Sinn des letzten Satzes erschließt sich mir überhaupt nicht. Der Tag war doch gut und sie ist happy. Wenn sie hofft, daß der nächste Tag NOCH besser wird:
I hope that the next school day will be even better.

Dear Diary,
today I went to school. It has beeen the first time for three months. In the beginning, I was frightened, because I didn't want the others from my class to see that I have only one leg. I didn't want them to pitty me. As well, I didn't want to talk about the accident and about my dead horse Pilgrim.
Then I went in the elevator. Before the doors were closed, two young people joined me in the elevator.They looked at the blank wall, but I knew that they were only thinking about my missing leg. When the doors of the elevator opened, both persons ran out of the elevator and I heart them talking about my amputated leg.
In my classroom, I sat down at my table. But then, my classmates entered the classroom. They all said hello to me. Everything seemed to be normal. I didn't understand that. They knew about my accident, but they didn't ask anything about that. The day was better than I had thought.
I'm so happy that my classmates are as normal as before. I hope that the next schoolday will continue being better than before.
Good night.
Your Grace

sorry, da ist mir ein Fehler unterlaufen.
in der siebtletzten Zeile im Text: '. I heard the talking.

Letzter Satz.
I hope that the next schoolday will better than before.

Mibi-:
nicht gleich "Gute Antwort" drücken.
Sie könnte falsch sein. So wie diese hier.