Verbesserung engllsich rede

Hallo! Ich muss morgen in Englisch eine Rede halten. habe diese auch schon geschrieben wäre nur nett wenn die jemand verbessern könnte weil ich mir nicht so sicher bin ob da alles stimmt. Außerdemwäre es auch nett wenn jemandem noch ein bessere bzw. löngerer einstieg einfallen würde oder was man zu meinem noch dazu schreiben könnte aber mir selbst fällt leider nichts ein. Hier meine bis jetzt vorbereitete Rede: We don’t live in the rainforest. So does the death of the rainforest hurt us? Yes it does! The rainforests once covered 14 % of our planet, now they only cover an area of 6 %. In one second one football field of the rainforests are burnt down or cut down. Every year 16 million hectares of the rainforests get destroyed. That corresponds to the half area of Germany. So in 10 years over 50 million acres of the rainforests on our earth are destroyed and in 2030 round about 55% of the rainforests will disappear. Isn’t it horrible? And what are people doing with all the wood and the great areas? A lot of people race their money with valuable woods like mahogany and with the rest of the wood they make furniture or paper. And on the areas that are burnt down they plant plants, which they sell as cheap food for animals. So the rainforest is responsible that we have cheap steaks and chicken nuggets Trees transform carbon dioxide into oxygen. The rainforests are one of the largest oxygen producers on our earth. Without oxygen we will die and more than 20% of the world oxygen is produced in rainforests. As well, the death of the rainforests affects the global warming. But the rainforest is only one example how we destroy our planet. A lot of experts think that in the following 100 years 50% of our animals and plants become extinct. Today, there are over 15 000 animals and plants, which are endangered. The shocking thing is that we only know round about 2 million species and 40 to 60% live in the tropical rainforests. An estimate says that there are about 20 million species. That’s why you die when the rainforests die. The rainforests help you breath. It cleans the air of carbon dioxide. The rainforests keep you cool. It acts as the air-conditioner of our world. Jungle rain supplies fresh water for the world. Many of the medicines and foods we use today first came from the native people of the rainforests. And that are only a few examples why the death of the rainforests hurt you. So please use less paper and write on the front and on the back of it. And be responsible for our nature; it’s not a natural thing that we have such an easy life on our planet. And always remember – You are also a reason why large areas of trees, animals and plants have to die. schonmal für alle antworten