Formalen Text umschreiben: Bewerbung für ein Freiwilligenprogramm in Peru

Titel: Formalen Text umschreiben: Bewerbung für ein Freiwilligenprogramm in Peru

Frage: Welche informellen Wörter und Ausdrücke in einem Text über ein Freiwilligenprogramm in Peru müssen formal umgeschrieben werden?

Antwort:

Frage: Welche informellen Wörter und Ausdrücke in einem Text über ein Freiwilligenprogramm in Peru müssen formal umgeschrieben werden?

Antwort: Um den Text formal umschreiben zu können, müssen informelle Wörter und Ausdrücke durch formale Alternativen ersetzt werden. Im folgenden Text werden die markierten informellen Ausdrücke durch formale Varianten ersetzt:

My last year in High School is finally over and I want to apply for your volunteer program in Peru this Summer. (My last year of high school has finally come to an end, and I would like to submit an application for your volunteer program in Peru this summer.)

I was reading stuff on your website about it and I think that program sounds awesome. (I have been reviewing the information on your website, and I believe that your program sounds excellent.)

I think it would be cool to work with kids in orphanages or in schools. (I believe it would be a rewarding experience to work with children in orphanages or schools.)

I've actually already done that here in the US. My high school has a volunteer program that I was a part of. (I have actually had the opportunity to do this already in the United States. I previously participated in my high school's volunteer program.)

We helped kids in difficult situations with their homework and reading and we did fun activities together. (We assisted children in challenging circumstances with their homework and reading, while also participating in enjoyable activities together.)

I helped organise these things and the kids liked me a lot. (I was involved in organizing these activities, and the children had a positive opinion of me.)

I'm also great at speaking Spanish already because I've been taking Spanish classes since I was 12 years old. (Additionally, I have a high level of proficiency in Spanish due to my studies in the language since the age of 12.)

Since I want to become a teacher in a Spanish-speaking community, going to Peru would be a good experience for me. (Given my aspiration to become a teacher in a Spanish-speaking community, the opportunity to go to Peru would provide valuable experience.)

Nach der formalen Umformung lautet der umgeschriebene Text:

My last year of high school has finally come to an end and I would like to submit an application for your volunteer program in Peru this summer. I have been reviewing the information on your website, and I believe that your program sounds excellent.

I believe it would be a rewarding experience to work with children in orphanages or schools. I have actually had the opportunity to do this already in the United States. I previously participated in my high school's volunteer program. We assisted children in challenging circumstances with their homework and reading, while also participating in enjoyable activities together.

I was involved in organizing these activities and the children had a positive opinion of me. Additionally – I have a high level of proficiency in Spanish due to my studies in the language since the age of 12.

Given my aspiration to become a teacher in a Spanish-speaking community, the opportunity to go to Peru would provide valuable experience.