Englisch summary schreiben was weglassen ist grammatikalisch wichtig

SOS ChildrenÄs Villages'' tells the story of Domitila Orazco who have a childhood in Esteli and she want to help the kids there now. Her name is Domitila Orazco and she grow up in SOS Children Village in Esteli. At first she life there since she's 7, because her mother is blind and her father left them. Later, with 21, she hold her close relationship with her friendly SOS mother. Than she's a teacher in the SOS village. At the end the national director ask her if she want to be director of the SOS Children Village in Esteli. Of course she accept, because she think that it's very important in her life to help childrens who have the same past. Sometimes she doesn#t call it work and she's proud, happy, blessed and privileged to be a part of the SOS family. Her biggest wish is that the children finish theis educations and that they can life their own life without help. Nun möchte ich halt wissen, was für euch, die die Story nicht kennen eher uninteressant ist und wo ich grammatikalisch komplett versagt habe Ist wirklich sehr sehr wichtig. Ich für xxx0o0o0o0xxx Ich hoffe die Mods haben gegen solche fragen nichts.

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Muss in Englisch eine Summary schreiben. Was kann ich auch weglassen? Ist es grammatikalisch ok? Ist wichtig

Her name is Domitila Orazco and she grEw up in SOS Children Village in Esteli.
At first she liVeD there since she's 7, because her mother is blind and her father left them.
Later, with 21, she hold her close relationship with her friendly SOS mother. ThEn she WAS a teacher in the SOS village.
At the end the national director askED her if she wantS to be director of the SOS Children Village in Esteli. Of course she acceptED, because she thOUGHT that it's very important in her life to help childrens who have the same past. Sometimes she doesn't call it work and she's proud, happy, blessed and privileged to be a part of the SOS family.
Her biggest wish is that the children finish theiR educations and that they can life their own life without help."
Hab dir das Korrigierte in Großbuchstaben reingeschrieben
ich dahcte das muss im Präsens.
Warum ist das an den Stellen nicht so?
Weil Du ja aus ihrer Vergangenheit berichtest und das ja auch schon im Ausgangstext in der Vergangenheit war und deswegen auch wieder in der Vergangenheit in Deiner Summary sein muss