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In Nottingham arrived we realize that Nottingham was not so interesting city. das is falsch und kein gutes englisch.besser wär vielleicht that nottingham is not very interesting oder so. dann there WERE, nicht there WAS only a few theaters. und "where there talked." is auch falsch, ich denke du meinst "where THEY talked.". dann bei london steht: "the city has very large". very large was denn? die stadt hat sehr groß steht da momentan.muss noch ein objekt hin.
da sind irgendwie 1000 fehler drin und gutes englisch is das auch nicht.würd ich vielleicht mal mit deinem lehrer bequatschen, der kann dir dann auch direkt sagen woran du arbeiten musst.

ich glaub auch das das helfen würde den text zu kennen

Nottingham
Nottingham is located in the Middle of England and has 300.000 inhabitants.
To get to Nottingham, we had to drive about 180km to the south.
The ride lasted about 2 hour.
It is well known for the legend of Robin Hood.
After we arrived in Nottingham we realized that Nottingham was not such an interesting city.
There were only some Theaters, museums and many parks which talked about the legend of Robin Hood. But that was not so interesting for older people and a bit boring.
In the afternoon the street in Nottingham are so empty only some bunkers are on the street.
That was the reasons that we left Nottingham after 4 hours to the next and last Stop of the tour London.
City Tour-London
The trip to London also lasted 2 hours and was 180 km long.
I arrived in London and planned to visit the sights.
It is not so easy to visit all the sights because the city has very large.
But there was the sightseeing tour buses that daily drive through the city and show the tourist attractions.
I wanted to make the tour alone because it was not so expansive and the attraction were all nearby.
We started the Tour at a convenient place in Trafalgar Square that we simply could reach with the underground.
First, I went to the south in the Whitehall Street Whitehall and then to Bridge St from there you can also see the Big and the houses of Parliament.
From the Westminster Bridge you can see also the London Eye
The London eye offers a spectacular view over London and its surroundings. With its 135 m height, it is the biggest observation wheel in the world.
From Westminster br. I went to the in west to champion Abbyvon fromwhere you can see the Buckingham palace
Buckingham Palace is the Queen’s residence in London. When the queen is in the palace, you can see the Royal Standard on the roof of the palace. If the Queen is not in the palace, you see the Union Jack.
From Queen Victorea Memorial I went across Admiralty arch and marched to Piccadilly.
Piccadilly Circus is the centre of London’s nightlife. Its neon lights are famous all over the world. The Eros fountain is a great meeting place if you want to go to one of the plenty restaurants, bars, nightclubs or theatres nearby.
That was the End of my tour after that we went to the car park where we have parked our car and brought it back to the car rental station in London.
Warst du in London alleine unterwegs?

ja ich bin sehr oft in london hehe sprechen kann ich irgendwie aber schreiben fällt ein wirklich sehr schwer nicht alleine mein onckel lebt dort und manchmal nehme ich freunde von hier mitD: Returning
In the Underground costs the one day ticket £ 3.50 and with the underground we can reach everything quickly. We are only this day in London. The plane to Germany was In the early morning.
Prices for the bus to Stansted was out for 9 pounds for adults and children was the same price. The journey lasted 145 min. The bus runs every 45 minutes and brings us to the airport.
When we arrived we took the plane and flew back to Hamburg.
das haeb nsie noch vergessen wen sie wollen schicke ich ihnen BP zu.

Returning
The Underground one day ticket costs £ 3.50 and with the underground we could reach everything quickly. We are only one day in London. The plane to Germany departed In the early morning.
Prices for the bus to Stansted was 9 pounds for adults and the same forchildren. The bus runs every 45 minutes and brought us to the airport.
When we arrived we took the plane and flew back to Hamburg. The journey lasted 145 min.
Naja die Engländer verstehen einem schon irgendwie.sind viele die in England leben und arbeiten und die kein Englisch können. Ich war nur einmal in London aber mein Freund hat dort ein paar Jahre studiert.

um ehrlich zu sein london ist ein sehr schön stadt ich bin erst 16 jahre alt und als ich da einmal war wollte ich da immer wieder hin

Ja ich finde es dort auch superschön.vor allem die tube ist sehr interessant und Camden market. Ich würd gerne mal wieder hinfahren aber mein Freund findet es langweilig da und besucht lieber andere Städte

Vielleicht ist das ja der Fehler, dass kein Text da ist.

die frage ist einfach unsinnig und gehört gelöscht.

baghira solche menschen wie sie sollten einfach mal leise sein solche nervigen menschen die nix zutun haben den ganzen tag und sich um solche probleme kümmern lassen sie einfach ihre kommentare.